The pacing was really hard. I didn't want to rush it, but I knew it needed to be no more than three parts. There is so much to cram into such a small amount of words. I'm extremely happy it works for you, though. It's the classic three-act structure doing its thing.
Finally got a chance to dig into this full story. This is an exquisite fusion of science fiction and raw emotional depth—entanglement as both a quantum phenomenon and a profound metaphor for love, loss, and the self’s dissolution into another. The writing is immersive, lyrical, and devastatingly intimate. A beautifully executed meditation on connection, grief, and the permanence of love.
Honestly, I'm at a loss for words right now. Thank you... for taking the time to read the story and for your thoughtful and generous comments. This story made me go deep and to be seen like this and understood means more than I can express.
Simply beautiful, as I knew it would be, from reading part one. And yet something is lurking… it’s so well-paced.
The pacing was really hard. I didn't want to rush it, but I knew it needed to be no more than three parts. There is so much to cram into such a small amount of words. I'm extremely happy it works for you, though. It's the classic three-act structure doing its thing.
You achieved it brilliantly.
Finally got a chance to dig into this full story. This is an exquisite fusion of science fiction and raw emotional depth—entanglement as both a quantum phenomenon and a profound metaphor for love, loss, and the self’s dissolution into another. The writing is immersive, lyrical, and devastatingly intimate. A beautifully executed meditation on connection, grief, and the permanence of love.
Honestly, I'm at a loss for words right now. Thank you... for taking the time to read the story and for your thoughtful and generous comments. This story made me go deep and to be seen like this and understood means more than I can express.
Excellent work, it really builds the tension and atmosphere about this unique situation
Thanks, Jon - hopefully the final part doesn’t disappoint….